ext_75040 ([identity profile] sarcasticval.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] blue_bells 2010-04-14 02:10 am (UTC)

:D :D :D

Another excellent chapter and a random shout out? Be still my little heart!

Awesome, as always. I continue to be intrigued! Wee!Castiel is adorable, and I'm glad to see him getting a little Winchester-style TLC. Gabriel's cameo in the police station was surprising and I wonder what he's up to! And never in a million years did I expect the boys to get kidnapped--oh noes! Double oh noes now that John seems to have lost what little faith he had in Cas!

Did anyone ever tell you that you do a really nice job with writing kids? You do. And I don't know why, but I absolutely loved Castiel's fascination with the coffee maker. It seemed very true to the character/situation and cracked me up! I also find it interesting that Cas would ask John if he's really FBI--you think he'd know, hanging around future!Dean as much as he does. Now I'm wondering about the implications of that line ;) And speaking of lines, “Why must I sit in the back seat, John? You allowed me the shotgun vantage last night.” made me lol something fierce. Oh, Castiel.

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