ext_63696 ([identity profile] ianthe-echo.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] blue_bells 2010-11-13 09:31 pm (UTC)

I love this.

However, in this sentence, "Sam watches, almost bemused, when Adam hurls his boots at the bathroom door after it slams too hard." I think you meant amused (aroused to mirth), not bemused (bewildered).

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