etrix ([identity profile] etrix.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] blue_bells 2011-09-20 09:08 pm (UTC)

That is a freaking nasty place to leave it because Crowley's right, the Winchester's really don't learn. I'm planning on rushing to the next part but I caught a couple Britishisms in here:

He kicks at the tyres, then the tyre arch."

Should be: "He kicks at the tires (or wheels), then the wheel well."

Off to gulp down the next bit. =]

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