That is a freaking nasty place to leave it because Crowley's right, the Winchester's really don't learn. I'm planning on rushing to the next part but I caught a couple Britishisms in here:
He kicks at the tyres, then the tyre arch."
Should be: "He kicks at the tires (or wheels), then the wheel well."
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He kicks at the tyres, then the tyre arch."
Should be: "He kicks at the tires (or wheels), then the wheel well."
Off to gulp down the next bit. =]