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I loved the family dynamics- I definitely love Molly having two daddies, especially with one of them a reformed murderer who murdered both their parents.

[lol] You just gave me this great image....

MOLLY: [to Gabriel] You killed my father!
MOHINDER: [leans down to Molly] Is your name Inigo Montoya?
MOLLY: Huh?
MOHINDER: Get in line.
GABRIEL: [smirks at Mohinder] You sure you want to be first? [does the hand-flare thing]

I'm glad the family dynamic worked for you, I've been really influenced by the characterisations that have been floating around the comm, but some serious counseling would definitely be in order. Good luck getting Gabriel to go or even tolerate their counselor!

Hmm, I think Aunt Audrey may call social services (and who could blame her, really). ;] I don't mind Janice actually, but then I haven't thought hard on the subject. Although, Audrey could still be around... now you're giving me some ideas.

No, bunnies, no! [chases them back down the hole] If I *do* manage to write a prequel, it could be fun in itself, but it would have to wait until I finish this semester's uni commitments, haha, so close!

Thanks for the great feedback, btw, I'm glad you enjoyed the story!