Date: 2007-05-24 01:32 am (UTC)
Your contribution was wonderful and I ate up this drabble quite happily.

This really is a good example of a Suresh-Gray-Walker family. I especially like the distinction between Molly and Gabriel's suppressed memories, but I wonder how much of Mohinder is suppressed if at all. You presented both the past trauma very well in such a strange family setting, but I like how the flash of the future hints at an inevitability that needs to be dealt with.

Hope you write another one. :)
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