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God in Heaven help me I'm writing Heroes fic and I desperately need sleep. At least I'm getting good use out of this icon (mm, orange). I come clean, this comm has completely sucked me in and I just keep sinking. I must put together a rec list soon.

» Title: Untitled Mylar and Molly Family Piece (PG-13) by [livejournal.com profile] _bluebells
» Fandom: Heroes
» Word count: 1,058
» Pairing(s): Mohinder/Gabriel
» Warnings: Spoilers up to 1x22, "Landslide" and present-tense experimentation
» Disclaimer: If Heroes belonged to me it would be some wound family cliche where everyone was obscurely related, everyone abused their powers for all the right reasons and there were more tortured phone conversations. As things stand, Heroes remains the property of Tim Kring.
» Summary: I've leaped on the Mylar and Molly family bandwagon, I love it so good, but since most fic for it has been delectable fluff or crack, I wondered what might happen if we transposed it onto (semi-not-really) canonverse? Gabriel gets locked out of the house (not crack).


Seven months ago things changed for Gabriel. He remembers thick blood sliding between his fingers and the thrill of apocalypse on his fingertips, but he refuses to recall the rest. He denies those details that would make him falter in the brilliance of his daughter's smile.

I don't have a daughter. He suppresses the thought.

If he doesn't think back his chest won't tighten so much when Mohinder lays a hand on his shoulder and peers into his face with deep concern.

Seven months ago he didn't have a daughter or a... whatever Mohinder is - housemate, lover, conscience, carer. He concentrates on the way Molly clings to him when she bounds into his arms and how Mohinder murmurs his name when Gabriel smiles against his smooth, warm neck.

Once upon a time he pleaded for his mother to tell him that it was enough to be Gabriel. At some unremarkable point in his journey, Gabriel allowed this adopted family to convince him all of this was more than enough. He continues to believe it until the day he comes home and Molly won't open the door.

"Daddy! Daddy!" She cries, and through the screen and Gaussian glass doors Gabriel can see the blur of his daughter dashing away into the house.

"Molly?" He feels himself frown and pulls the screen door open. "Molly, I'm outside!" He knocks on the glass. There's no mistaking the foreign hysteria in her voice and lest he's overreacting to some unseen danger inside his house, he's going to give her another three seconds to -

The door swings open and Mohinder looks as confused as Gabriel. "What happened? Molly, it's just your father!" He yells back over his shoulder and then, to Gabriel, "Why didn't you let yourself in?"

"I forgot my keys," Gabriel mutters, pushing past Mohinder and scans what he can see of their home from the foyer. "Where's Molly? Is she all right?"

Molly is nowhere in sight, but the race of her heart is pounding in his ears; Mohinder is incongruously calm and staring at him. "You... forgot? That happens?"

Gabriel removes his black cap and turns on him sharply. "Molly, Mohinder." Gabriel unzips his thick black jacket and follows the thundering heartbeat to the coat closet.

Mohinder is shaking his head and rolls up the sleeves of his loose turtleneck. "I think she mistook you for somebody else. The biggest drama in this house is that we're out of peanut butter again and you're late for dinner."

Mohinder's words fade as Gabriel pulls the closet doors aside and a pair of blue and white tennis shoes peeks out from beneath the pegged row of thick sport and winter jackets.

Gabriel sighs and taps the toe of one of Molly's shoes. "Molly? Are you all right?"

The green arm of Mohinder's winter jacket slowly draws aside and Molly's wide blue eyes glance between them. She looks beyond her fathers, warily scanning the foyer. "Is it just us?"

Gabriel frowns and holds out his arms. "C'mere, Pumpkin." She pauses and then Gabriel barely retains his crouched balance as Molly crashes into him. Almost simultaneously, the force of something else entirely non-physical washes over him, glazing his vision white.

When his vision clears, Gabriel finds himself sitting across from Mohinder in their lounge room, Molly is tucked against his side, shoulders slack. She stares staring vacantly at Gabriel and Mohinder is speaking softly to her. "... But your father and I still love you, Molly, and - "

"I wanna see Matt and Janice," Molly interjects and Gabriel notices her eyes are rimmed red from crying.

"No, Molly, I - " Gabriel hears himself say, but Molly insists, louder this time.

"I wanna go to Matt and Janice's! I want Uncle Matt!"

Gabriel feels the dangerous ripple of anger beneath his skin and his voice rises unintentionally. "Those people are not your family...."

Molly doesn't miss a beat. "You're not my family! My Mommy... and my Daddy.... " Her lower lip trembles as the tears start again and she whimpers, small hands held in Mohinder's. "I want Uncle Matt and Aunt Janice."

With a snarl, Gabriel throws up his hands and starts pacing the rug. He can feel Mohinder's eyes on his back and considers what he could possibly say in this situation to dissuade or disprove Molly's newfound memories that were supposed to be hollowed out. He'd heard of this happening before. Some of those with abilities had managed to remember things the Haitian had erased or... suppressed.

Suppressed. Damn it. He couldn't afford this now.

"Tell you what," he hears Mohinder soothe somewhere in the background, "We'll all go together. But first, let's make sure they're at home...."

"-- Daddy?"

Gabriel starts at the voice in his ear and like the lifting blanket of sleep, he grows aware of a shifting weight against his chest. The image of Molly's tears dissolves and he's suddenly kneeling on the polished planks of their foyer with Molly leaning back in the cradle of his arms, face slack with shock.

"Daddy, you just went blind."

Gabriel stares back, the hurtful image of her disavowal still playing like flash burn behind his eyes. With much effort, he shrugs. "It happens, Pumpkin." He smiles for extra measure. "It's a gift." Molly seems to accept that and wraps herself tighter around her father as he rises to his feet. She takes the black baseball cap from his hand.

"Don't wear this one. I don't like it," she mumbles, reaching backwards to hang it over one of the coats before snuggling into Gabriel's hug, arms tucking inside his jacket. Gabriel prolongs a kiss to the crown of her head and feels Mohinder come up behind him as the man runs a hand through their daughter's hair.

"Feeling better now?" Mohinder gently prompts and Molly's face breaks into a small, familiar smile.

Gabriel bounces her in his arms. "Then you can walk to the kitchen because you're getting too big for me to carry."

Barely has Gabriel finished and Molly's arms have clamped around his neck. "No, no!"

Gabriel sighs mock-exasperatedly and Mohinder smiles at him, raising an eyebrow.

"All right then, wide load coming through!"

He follows Mohinder to the kitchen and makes a mental note that they'll need to talk after Molly's been put to bed that night.

Date: 2007-05-21 05:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] luckybrans.livejournal.com
That was great. I have no other words.

Now I'm wondering about the background to this story. How did Mohinder and Gabriel get together and who is behind the mind wipe?

Date: 2007-05-22 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Thanks!

How did Mohinder and Gabriel get together and who is behind the mind wipe?

[lol] I admit I was interested in a story that went ahead to a time after the build-up and securing the 'happily ever after' to when things start to settle and, with these three, inevitably fall apart. I can tell you for certain that the Haitian was involved in the loss of Molly's memory and if the purpose of this story wasn't to stick with canon I'd have let Sylar eat his brain -- easy fix! Gabriel and Mohinder's story is a whole 'nother ball game.

For another time. ;]

Date: 2007-05-21 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mneiai.livejournal.com
Really intriguing idea, I'm glad to see someone attempting the family unit idea in a more serious setting.

Date: 2007-05-22 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Thanks, it still leaves a lot of questions, but as you say, it was an interesting idea to draft.

Date: 2007-05-21 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peace-and-song.livejournal.com
I didn't really like the idea of this at first, but you make it work so well! ♥ Good job!

I hope there's more to come!!♥

Date: 2007-05-22 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Thank you, I'm glad this piece worked for you!

Well, I left a lot of questions unanswered in this piece, but we'll have to see. ;]

Date: 2007-05-21 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aheartfulofyou.livejournal.com
Ooh. As much as I like the Molly crack!fics, I'm a crazy canon chick who likes stuff following the canon to the extreme, so I liked this option. Very, very nice. I like it lots.

Date: 2007-05-22 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
I love the crack for this family, but my brain was being overtaken by the possibility (however vague) of this happening in canon. So, leap of faith, assume a lot and this is a potential aftermath; I think it could be even MORE canon >:D

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2007-05-21 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivy-b.livejournal.com
I loved the family dynamics- I definitely love Molly having two daddies, especially with one of them a reformed murderer who murdered both their parents. Sheesh, they'd need counciling eventually. I guess the mind-wipe would be the only way with Molly, though both of them got to witness the murders. I loved Gabriel's vision/fear about Molly disowning him, the only thing is I wish it were aunt Audrey rather than aunt Janice.

You should really write a background story to this- how Mohinder and Gabriel came together and overcame the "Sylar" in him and turned into a happy family. It could be both angsty and fluffy.

Date: 2007-05-22 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
I loved the family dynamics- I definitely love Molly having two daddies, especially with one of them a reformed murderer who murdered both their parents.

[lol] You just gave me this great image....

MOLLY: [to Gabriel] You killed my father!
MOHINDER: [leans down to Molly] Is your name Inigo Montoya?
MOLLY: Huh?
MOHINDER: Get in line.
GABRIEL: [smirks at Mohinder] You sure you want to be first? [does the hand-flare thing]

I'm glad the family dynamic worked for you, I've been really influenced by the characterisations that have been floating around the comm, but some serious counseling would definitely be in order. Good luck getting Gabriel to go or even tolerate their counselor!

Hmm, I think Aunt Audrey may call social services (and who could blame her, really). ;] I don't mind Janice actually, but then I haven't thought hard on the subject. Although, Audrey could still be around... now you're giving me some ideas.

No, bunnies, no! [chases them back down the hole] If I *do* manage to write a prequel, it could be fun in itself, but it would have to wait until I finish this semester's uni commitments, haha, so close!

Thanks for the great feedback, btw, I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Date: 2007-05-21 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luvmeanddespair.livejournal.com
Aw, the way she take the baseball cap away *sniffle*.

But I loved how it was Mohinder and Molly that showed him it was enough to be Gabriel.

Date: 2007-05-22 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Yeah, I don't know if I flogged the black baseball cap and jacket enough or too much for people to clue in to why Molly didn't like them. I really shouldn't write stories in one sitting and post them without at least waiting to look over it in the morning. :P

Now that Mrs. Gray is gone, I don't know who else could affirm Gabriel aside from original childhood friends of his.

Haha, I love your icon. So sweet.

Date: 2007-05-21 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenoamorist.livejournal.com
First off, your icon is really pretty. *sparkles!*

Secondly! I really like this, the realistic tone you've added to it, and the way you remind us that Molly's still likely not perfectly recovered. Adding the Haitian's powers was a nice touch too :D

- hl

Date: 2007-05-22 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
First off, give me your icon now. But my icon is quite yummy, too, I agree, it's so... orange. It makes me hungry (kudos to [livejournal.com profile] oravannahka who made it).

Hey, thanks! I tried for realism and aside from all the fast-forwarding of making Mylar work and adopting Molly, your word assures me it was (at least a marginal) success. Hmmyeah, I don't think the initial 'family transition' could work without a little Haitian intervention. ;]

Thanks for reading, hl.

Date: 2007-05-22 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenoamorist.livejournal.com
XDD My buddy [livejournal.com profile] fatalnocturne made it, but I don't know if she'll be having an icon post any time soon ^^;;

And no prob 8D

- hl

Date: 2007-05-22 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
[livejournal.com profile] fatalnocturne has nice style, encourage them to cross post to the heroes communities if they ever do make an icon post. ;]

Date: 2007-05-22 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demonqueen666.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Cute Mylar + Molly is nice, but I really did like this take on it, the same family dynamic but with the twisted touch of realism. And then it gets cute at the end again, which just makes it all so lovely-bittersweet ♥

Date: 2007-05-23 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] without-mission.livejournal.com
wow I really liked this *-* interesting way to view how the family came together. It would make sense if Molly was mindwiped in order for the family to work ._. and you did it very nicely! (bows and kisses your wrist) XD

Date: 2007-05-23 06:40 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-05-23 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hapakitsune.livejournal.com
Man! You make me feel guilty for writing saccharine family stories about these three. Now I'm going to have to attempt a serious one just to retain my image as the Mylar/Molly writer.


...Lol. Great job! This was really done, though I'd be interested in seeing a prequel? Or something. Thumbs up from me!

Date: 2007-05-23 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
[lol] No, don't feel guilty! You are my muse, I love your crack! I call for more crack! In fact, I think the next thing I write for these guys would probably be crack before I have any hope of attempting a serious prequel.

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll have to see what I can do in the ways of prequel -- that is, if people in the Mylar comm don't write it for me first (the season finale leaves such opportunities and I'm about ready to declare [livejournal.com profile] willowwhiskers's story canon Mylar action).

Date: 2007-05-23 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hapakitsune.livejournal.com
LOLZ I know. That story is canon as far as everyone in the community is concerned, methnks.

And more crack is forthcoming. I just need to go determine exactly how I'm going to write it.

Date: 2007-05-24 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evo-spider.livejournal.com
Your contribution was wonderful and I ate up this drabble quite happily.

This really is a good example of a Suresh-Gray-Walker family. I especially like the distinction between Molly and Gabriel's suppressed memories, but I wonder how much of Mohinder is suppressed if at all. You presented both the past trauma very well in such a strange family setting, but I like how the flash of the future hints at an inevitability that needs to be dealt with.

Hope you write another one. :)

Date: 2007-05-24 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Oh, thank you!

Actually, I took this drabble with the angle that Gabriel and Mohinder remembered everything and Molly not much at all. If Gabriel had had his memories erased and finally recalled them (i.e. like Matt, though in bits and pieces) that could be devastating for everyone -- interesting idea.

I'll see what I can do. ;]

Date: 2007-05-25 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mossymermaid.livejournal.com
but they've got to have a happy ending. Because. Well, because of Molly really.

:-/

Date: 2007-05-25 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Yes, we must think of the children.

I guess I have to write a prequel and sequel to this then, before I forget the bunnies that have been spawning in response to people's comments. And I need to stop cheating with fast-forwarding all the plot development. XD

Date: 2007-05-25 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catoasapun.livejournal.com
Yeah, so I know I'm pretty behind, but... I really loved how you wrote it with slight angst. I really adore the whole Mylar adopting Molly thing, but, it's just a bit TOO much idealism, you know? The way you wrote it is perfect; kudos :D

Date: 2007-05-25 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bluebells/
Man, I'm blushing. You really flatter me! Thank you for letting me know what you thought of this and there is NO time limit on feedback.

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